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于GRE作文考试,很多人都会觉得无从下手,小编无意中发现下面这篇文章,从《盗梦空间》的构思入手,分析了GRE作文的特点,希望对大家有所帮助。以下是原文:
Inception是我近3年看的最给力的电影,构思之精巧令人拍案。我凭着职业本能想到了GRE写作当中最困扰中国考生的一个部分那就是Issue(立论文)和Inception之间的关系。现在和大家分享和切磋一下:
GRE issue 评分标准无非一个字概括complexity.
TOEFL作文:学生到底受老师影响多还是受同学影响多?
第一,一般托福作文要有一边倒的倾向立场,然后稍微做让步,这样能把重点凸显出来。
第二,论证过程极为简单粗暴:
In my opinion, teachers have more influence on students, because it is teachers who have the knowledge, which plays an important part in personal development of students. For example, Socrates uses questioning and his dialectic way of thinking to inspire his students to think independently. It is hard to imagine the achievement of Plato would be like if Socrates were a mere snob who braggers about the abundant knowledge he possesses rather than enlighten Plato’s critical thinking aptitude. On the other hand, the classmates of the same age cannot offer better understanding of the world to one and another, and therefore, it is impossible to replace teachers’ function in the pass-on of knowledge.
以上文字,托福作文拿一个满分略少不是什么大问题。但是仔细一看,论证思路极其简单,老师知道知识,知识对于个人发展很重要, 同学之间知识储备差不多,所以,同学影响和老师影响相比,老师更牛逼。为了证明这个简单粗暴的理论,作者还给出了漂亮的论据,搬出了古希腊先贤苏格拉底和柏拉图作为佐证。文字迤逦,字字珠玑。
一言蔽之,GRE考的是思想。思想是概念和逻辑的关系。概念应该解构,逻辑应该研究关系,这样,思维就不在是二维平面的对错,也不是三维平面的对错对,而是n维平面,各成一体的自我存在。就像梦一样,总是有道理,其实换了更高的维度看,反而不清不楚了。