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老师布置的作业为：Some university students want to live in a room alone. Others prefer having roommates. Which do you like better, living alone or living with roommates? Give specific examples to support your answer. 200words

我写的作文如下：living with roommates is best
Some university students want to live in a room alone. Others prefer having roommates. In my opinion that living with roommates is best.
On the one hand,living with roommates can improving ability about intercommunicate and it is favorable base for society.As the saying goes that the fittest will survive and experience is the best teacher,intercomunicate can getting students the edge and will climbing the career ladder after.
On the other hand,living with roommates can acquiring helpness.As the saying goes that many hesds are better than one and there is kindness to be found everywhere,roommate protrude assistance hands when students barge up against trouble，students are cutting energy and time down by learning.
Furthermore, more and more students deem that roomamate is friend. As the saying goes that a friend in need is a friend indeed and a life without friend is a life without sun,friends can enlightening mood and relax stress，relieve students of obsession，healthiness and happiness should be your eternal mates.
In summary,no doubt roommates are giving helpness and happiness for students,this is especially true that above all it.furthermore,increasing more interesting thing by roommates that update students knowledge，partake in joyance and painness or get students vote,so, living with roommates is best.

Better Living with Roommates
Some university students want to live in a room alone. Others prefer having roommates. In my opinion, living with roommates is best.
On the one hand,living with roommates can develop ability of intercommunication and it is favorable base for society.As the saying goes, the fittest will survive and experience is the best teacher. Besides intercomunicating can get students the edge and they will easily reach the top of career ladder later.
On the other hand,living with roommates can provide us with helpness.As the saying goes, many heads are better than one and there is kindness to be found everywhere.Roommates protrude assistant hands when students barge up against trouble. What's more, students are cutting down energy and time by learning together.
Furthermore, more and more students deem that roomamate is friend. As the saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed and a life without friend is a life without sun.So friends can enlighten mood, relax stress，and relieve students' obsession. We know healthiness and happiness should be our eternal companions.
In summary,no doubt roommates are creating help and happiness for students,this is especially true above all. Furthermore,the increase of more interests by roommates may help you to update your knowledge，partake in joyance and painness and get more votes, so living with roommates is best.