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Before being able to read the world, she was sent to France for marriage which could just bring in an unfixable peace between the two countries France and Austria at the cost of happiness of all her life. Of course, as a princess of Austria, she was Francy pants,to be extremely beautiful; as Queen of France, she could control the forces of nature and become a favorite in thousands. However, she felt mirthless all her life, which had been fixed by God the day when she became the princess and had nothing to do with women's rights.
Her simplicity makes people distressed and tells people what love and affection are, but keeps a deep sympathy. What her tragedy is, just because of naive, simply not understanding the world, self-indulgence, yet delicate and charming as well as stooping to compromise, only to offend against both the baronages and French people.

Such an innocent young woman, how can she be a country's queen?
All these are not unexpected, particularly her tragic marriage with a shy husband and sexlessness, but her support to her husband from beginning to end, just because she is naive.
When the minister told Marie that the people of France are starving with no bread, Marie smile innocently and said, "Why don't they eat cakes then?"
For an ordinary person, naivety is not a sin. But it is unacceptable for a queen of a country. Certainly, she is not the only extravagant queen in history. But she is destined to be the sacrifice of history and reforms, being born at such a time.
When she walked up to the guillotine, she stepped on the executor's foot, so she apologized and said, "Sorry, I didn't mean to do that". Is it a regret from the past indulgent lifestyle? Today, almost all French has forgiven her.

Goodbye, to the me in the past, to the me with no tomorrow - Marie-Antoinette

Before being able to understand (read) the world, she was sent to France for marriage which could just bring in an unfixable peace between the two countries France and Austria at the cost of happiness of all her life. Of course, as a princess of Austria, she was Francy pants, to be extremely beautiful; as Queen of France, she could control the forces of nature and become a favorite in thousands. However, she felt mirthless all her life, which had been fixed by God the day when she became the princess and had nothing to do with women's rights.

Her simplicity makes people distressed and tells people what love and affection are, but keeps a deep sympathy. What her tragedy is, just because of naiveness (naïve), simply not understanding the world, self-indulgence, yet delicacy (delicate) and charming as well as stooping to compromise, only to offend against both the baronages and French people.

As such (Such) an innocent young woman, how can she be a country's queen?

All these are not unexpected, particularly her tragic marriage with a shy husband of (and) sexlessness, but she supports her husband from the beginning to the end (her support to her husband from beginning to end), just because she is naive.

When the minister told Marie that the people of France were (are) starving with no bread, Marie smiled (smile) innocently and said, "Why don't they eat cakes then?"

For an ordinary person, naivety is not a sin; but (. But it is) an unacceptable thing for a queen of a country. Certainly, she is not the only extravagant queen in history; but she is destined to be the sacrifice of history and reforms, being born at such a time.

When she walked up to the guillotine, she stepped on the executor's foot, (so she) and apologized, "Sorry, I didn't mean to do that". Is it the (a) regret from the past indulgent lifestyle? Today, almost all French has forgiven her.

Goodbye, to the me in the past, to the me with no tomorrow - Marie-Antoinette