今天，我怀着激动的心情观看了建国60周年国庆阅兵式。开场是胡锦涛总书记在众人瞩目中进入天安门城楼，此后，振奋人心的阅兵开始了！各种新式
坦克，装甲车，战斗机，还有令全世界震惊的二炮武器，WOW，令我激动的热泪盈眶。还有各方队，，惊艳！最出彩的莫过于最后出场的女民兵方队了
，粉红的军装，雪白的长靴，万绿丛中一点红。国家的腾飞，经济的发达，才能有今日震惊世界的阅兵表演，让中国人民自豪，让世界各国见证，能够看
到这样一种盛况，我由衷的感到作为中国人的骄傲！





可以简略一点，句式不用很复杂

I am very exited to watch the parade of our country's 60th national foundation anniversary today. At the beginning,the general-secretary Hu Jintao enters into Tian An Men rostrum,which is surrounded by people.Then,the inspiring parade is starting! All kinds of new tanks, armored vehicles, fighter, and advanced weapons that are shocked by people from all over the world. Wow, my eyes brimmed with tears. And squares are also made me surprising, especially the militia women. They wear pink military uniform and snow white boots. They are very outstanding. With the development of our nation and economy, the parade can be brilliant all over the world. It makes our Chinese pride, while other countries in the world give testimony.Seeing such a pomp, I am very pride for our Chinese!