请高手帮助修改简历，并看看是否有遗漏的部分。

完整内容在
http://www.countercurrent.cn/resume.rar

修改之后请发送到 jia9379@163.com

另有追加分 谢谢！

--------由于字数限制，以下为部分内容--------

PERSONAL INFORMATION
[...]

EDUCATIONAL HISTORY
[...]

HONORS AND AWARDS
[...]

PUBLICATIONS
[...]

CERTIFICATES
 Test for English Majors (TEM) Band Eight
 Test for French Majors (TFS) Band Four
 Certificate of Completion of the training program for teachers of Chinese to speakers of other languages

WORKING EXPERIENCE
 2009.7-present Part-time interpreter and English language tutor
 2009.3-2009.4 Internship at Chinadaily.com.cn, the largest English portal in China
•Edited international news
•Maintained the BBS of Chinadaily.com.cn
 2008.6-2008.7 Internship at Movie Channel of China Central Television (CCTV), the major state television broadcaster in mainland China
•Translated the introduction of Chinese Directors of Martial Arts Movies
 2008.1-2008.2 Intern translator for French enterprise bioMérieux
•Translated materials from French into Chinese
•Proofread documents written in English
 2007-2008 Chinese language tutor of an Indonesian student
•Taught spoken and written Chinese

TRAINING EXPERIENCE
 2009.3-2009.5 Received training at Beijing International Education Exchange for teachers of Chinese to speakers of other languages

VOLUNTEERING EXPERIENCE
 2008.12. Volunteered for China-US Cultural Forum, jointly sponsored by Ministry of Culture of P.R.China and US National Endowment for the Humanities
 2008. 8. Volunteered for the 29th Olympic Games in Beijing, worked as an Olympic Family Assistant and interpreter for the President of Singapore National Olympic Consul and Deputy Prime Minister and Minister for Defense, Mr. Teo Chee Hean
 2008.1 Volunteered for the Signing Ceremony of High-Level Biosafety Laboratory Construction Contract, Ambassador of France in China Mr. Hervé Ladsous presented
 2007. 9. Volunteered for International Olympic Committee for the “Good Luck Beijing” sports event
 1998.8 Participated in the non-benefit performance of China Central Television (CCTV) for raising relief for victims of summer floods

AFFILIATIONS
 2005.9-2009.7 Member of the English competition center at Capital Normal University

你贴出来的部分挺好的。我不下载不清楚来历的东西，以免中毒，所以没有看你的全文。

美国人不用 年.月 这个格式。 简历应该是 Sept. 2005， 而不是 2005.9。

TEM 和 TFS 需要说明是中国的测试。这不是什么国际知名的东西，不说明会让人莫名其妙。

TRAINING EXPERIENCE 可以合并到 EDUCATIONAL HISTORY 或者 CERTIFICATES。或者干脆不要，因为CERTIFICATES已经包括了。