首页 > 留学知识库

问题: 谢谢了 帮忙改改 最好给个评分

题目:some people prdfer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change.others,however,think that change is always a good thing.discuss both these views and give your own opinion


In contemporary society,the issue of whether or not people should spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change in their life have been widely debated.The majority of people,especially the old people,who advocate avoiding change,claim that avoiding change can dnsure their life more stability .However,others,take a negative attitude,as far as they are concerned,change can bring some fresh element to them

People who vote for avoding change hold the following reasons.To begin with,avoiding change can relax their bodies and ease their minds,ensure them more energy for their jab,in addition,the practise can make the piople have more spare time to do something they like,it is beneficial to their health.Last but not least,the practise can make people perform more efficient,,they are hardly distracted by other thing

However,people who think otherwise also have strong reasons.They believethat fres element can bring people so different experience that influnence their concept of life,make the life of people more colourful.Besides,the creativity of people may be able to be enhanced.for this reason, further promote the prosperity of society is likely to be done .Finally,fresh elementcan gather people to play.Obviously,which will promote the communication between the persons,make our soviety more steady and harmonious.

Obviously,there is some element of truth is both argument .the question is whether we can find the balance between two.I personally think,everything has its drawback,what we muist do is make sure that positive ones are encourged and negative ones are elinimated as far as possible.

解答:

仅就我所知,对语法和词法作了部分修改,篇章结构未加妄动。打分就免了。

题目:some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things rather than change. However, others think that change is always a good thing. discuss both of these views and give your own opinion


In contemporary society, the issue of whether or not people should spend their lives doing the same things rather than change in their life has been widely debated. The majority of people, especially the old, who advocate avoiding change, claim that avoiding change can make their lives more stable. However, others take a negative attitude, as far as they are concerned, change can bring some fresh elements to them.

People who are for avoiding change hold the following views. Avoiding change can relax their bodies, ease their minds and ensure more energy for their job, in addition, it also can make people have more spare time to do something they like. It is beneficial to their health. Last but not least, it can make people work more efficiently, while change will make them get distracted.

However, people, who think otherwise, also have good reasons. They believe that fresh element can bring people so different experience that change of their concepts of life will make their lives more colorful. Besides, the creativity of people may be able to be enhanced for this reason and further promote the prosperity of society. .Finally fresh element can put people together and keep vigor. Obviously, which will promote the communication of persons to make our society more harmonious.

Undoubtedly, there is some truth in fresh element. Every coin has two sides. The key is whether we can find the balance between the two. All that we must do is make sure that positive side is encouraged and negative one is eliminated.