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dear my cousin
long time no see ,how have you been,i miss you so much ,when wiil you come back? now i want to tell you somethings interesting
last weekend i had a day trip on HONGKONG with pat who was my best friend .she was a lovely girl after my own heart
we searched for the information about the scenic place on computer until we were hungry . we went the shopping center in order to have something eat .but pat was attracted by the trendy clothes as soon as we came into the center. so i was forced to shopping with her.

after had lunch, i took pat to the kowloon walled city park and walked along the path just like i used to do with you but unfortunately,it rained,we have to run for cover
the most exciting thing happened at night .we visited the Avenver of Stars, there were a great number of hand prints made by some superstars.but the most exciting thing was the dazzling light show .how gorgeous it was and made me thought of you.i hoped i can see it with you one day.
i 'm busy with my exam ,so i have to stop here.
by the way, plese write to me soon if you have time
love
chrise

had a day trip on: had a day trip to
with pat: with pal
we went the shopping center: we went to a shopping center
to have something eat: to find something to eat
was forced to shopping: was forced to shop
after had lunch:after lunch
we have to run for cover: we had to run for cover
happened at night:happened that night
made me thought of you:made me think of you
i hoped i can see it: i hope i can see it