问题: 英语好的来 检查下
You know...when you're young,everything feels like the end of the world.It's not.It's just beginning.You might have to meet a few more jerks...but one day you're going to meet a boy who treats you the way that you deserve to be treated.Like the sun rises and sets with you.!
帮看下有没单词错误或语法错误,或者有没有地方可以用更好的句子来表达句子里的意思
解答:
你的这段话比较口语,可以不那么讲究,我把最显然的给你挑一挑,因为英文好了以后,不会犯一些简单错误是不犯的.
You know...when you're young,ANYthing(WILL MAKE YOU) feels like (IT IS )the end of the world. It's not. It's just(THR) beginning. You might have to meet a few more jerks...but one day you're going to meet a boy who treats you the way that you deserve to be treated. Like the sun rises and sets with you.!
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