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跪求雅思科技类万能观点,例如手机,电脑能否取代手写书信,高科技能否取代博物馆之类的。急!!!!请各位高人帮帮忙!!!

解答:

大连博普雅思---救命稻草之马良老师规划的科技类万能模板



各位同学们要注意这一类的作文虽然在具体内容上有些差别,但是从根本上来说它们的共性非常之明显。仅以转基因技术与因特网为例,它们二者虽然在具体应用上是完全不搭界的,但是它们却都具有如下的特征:

一:它们都提高了人们的生活水平而且都为以前的一些问题提供了解决方案。

1. Transgenic technology not only makes our living standard elevated but also provides a solution to a series of previously thorny or even unsolvable conundrums.

转基因技术不仅提高了我们的生活水平而且为以前很多棘手的甚至是无法解决的问题提供了方案。

2. Internet not only makes our living standard elevated but also provides a solution to a series of previously thorny or even unsolvable conundrums.

因特网不仅提高了我们的生活水平而且为以前很多棘手的甚至是无法解决的问题提供了方案子。



二:它们都推动了经济的进步而且造福了人类。

1. Transgenic technology, while developing economy, is also in human beings’ favor.

转基因技术,在加速社会发展的同时,也对人类有好处。

2. Internet, while developing economy, is also in human beings’ favor.

因特网,在加速经济发展的同时,也对人类有好处。



三:它们都可以推动社会的发展并且为进一步的科技革命提供基础。

1. The significance of transgenic technology can not only be seen in the aspect of promoting social advancement but also paving a way for further technological revolution。

转基因技术的意义不仅体现在发展社会方面,它还为下一步的技术革命铺平了道路。

2. The significance of Internet can not only be seen in the aspect of promoting social advancement but also paving a way for further technological revolution.

因特网的意义不仅体现在发展社会方面,它还为下一步的技术革命铺平了道路。



另外,我们只有一个观点是远远不够的,具体的事例在2006年的考试当中将会变的非常重要,所以下面我将对每个观点进行例子的引入。首先,让我们从第一个观点入手,即某项技术不仅提高了我们的生活水平而且为以前很多棘手的甚至是无法解决的问题提供了方案。

Suggested examples:

1. A report yielded by National Planning Bureau evidenced that 79 percent of the public find transgenic technology a great invention and it practically serves as a panacea to some social problems. 国家规划局所做的一份报告显示百分之79的公众认为转基因技术是一项伟大的发明,它现实的圆满的解决了很多的社会问题。

2. A report yielded by National Planning Bureau evidence that 79 percent of the public find Internet a great invention and it practically serves as a panacea to some social problems.国家规划局所做的一份报告显示百分之79的公众认为因特网是一项伟大的发明,它现实的圆满的解决了很多的社会问题。



其次,让我们来考虑一下可以与第二个观点(即某项技术推动了社会进步而且造福了人类)相匹配的例证。



Suggested examples:

1. Dr. William, a professor from Harvard University, disclosed that the application of transgenic technology, while making our life more convenient, also performed tremendous potential in national economy. Revenue of the industries related to transgenic technology takes a proportion of 10 percent of GNP.
William博士是一位哈佛大学的教授,他透露说转基因技术的应用,在使我们生活变得更加方便的同时,也在国民经济方面发挥了巨大的作用。与转基因技术相关的产业的收益占了国民生产总值的一成。
2.Dr. William, a professor from Harvard University, disclosed that the application of transgenic technology, while making our life more convenient, also performed tremendous potential in national economy. Revenue of the industries related to transgenic technology takes a proportion of 10 percent of GNP.
William博士是一位哈佛大学的教授,他透露说转基因技术的应用,在使我们的生活变得更加方便的同时,也在国民经济方面发挥了巨大的作用。与转基因技术相关的产业的收益占了国民生产总值的一成。


最后,我想就第三个观点(促进社会发展并对新一轮的科技进步铺平道路)给出一种示例的构成。大家可以看到,Mars前面所给出来的前两种例证是具体的数字或者是引用别人的话,那么第三种我们可以转换一下思路,变成一种阐释。

1. It is apparent that society is supported and motivated by comprehensive powers, and, in the meantime, the powers are interrelated and they are inter-dependent. Transgenic technology is no exception. 很明显的是社会是由综合性的力量所支撑并推动的,同时,这些力量是彼此联系,彼此依赖的。转基因技术也不例外。

2. It is apparent that society is supported and motivated by comprehensive powers, and, in the meantime, the powers are interrelated and they are inter-dependent. Internet is no exception. 很明显的是社会是由综合性的力量所支撑并推动的,同时,这些力量是彼此联系,彼此依赖的。因特网也不例外。



通过上述的内容大家可以看到,科技类作文是存在一些共性的,如果考试题目是手机,信息技术,电脑,生物制药(bio-pharmaceuticals), 空间技术(space technologies)等话题的话,我们也可以一一套用上述的表达。同时大家要注意到Mars给出的上述三个大范围观点所使用的句子结构是不一样的,因为我当初构思这篇文章的目的在于为那些对于一些话题实在是没有观点(ideas)或者是基础较差的的同学总结出来一些大的在任何情况下都适用的观点,而这些观点的弱势在于不新颖,如果大家把一个没有任何特点的观点用一种毫无特点的语言表达出来的话,那么考官在评分的时候就会对本篇作文的印象平平,所以说,如果大家决定要使用上面的观点的话,那么我建议大家一定要使用复杂句。

下面是Mars给大家用上面的结构所组成的一篇有关生物制药的文章主体。请大家看一下效果。

Bio-pharmaceuticals industry not only makes our living standard elevated but also provides a solution to a series of previously thorny or even unsolvable conundrums. A report yielded by National Planning Bureau evidenced that 79 percent of the public find bio-pharmaceuticals a great invention and it practically serves as a panacea to some social problems.



Bio-pharmaceuticals, while developing economy, is also in human beings’ favor. Dr. William, a professor from Harvard University, disclosed that the application of bio-pharmaceuticals, while making our life more convenient, also performed tremendous potential in national economy. Revenue of the industries related to transgenic technology takes a proportion of 10 percent of GNP.

The significance of bio-pharmaceuticals can not only be seen in the aspect of promoting social advancement but also paving a way for further technological revolution。It is apparent that society is supported and motivated by comprehensive powers, and, in the meantime, the powers are interrelated and they are inter-dependent. Bio-pharmaceuticals is no exception.(161)

大家在这篇文章的基础之上只需要加上开头和结尾就可以了。
最后希望各位同学们能够多加练习.祝你们考出好成绩.

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