问题: 英语挑错
When I am away from my home ,it’s no doubt I would miss my mum most.the main reason is that there’s something wrong with her kidneys and herl legs always swell after doing much housework or a bad cold.so I will really concern about my mum if I can’t be with her for days.and another reason is that ,I am used to have supper with my mum and share interesting news with her,so when I have to be away from my mum,how can I do not miss the person?
解答:
When I am away from my home ,there’s no doubt I would miss my mum most.The main reason is that there’s something wrong with her kidneys and besides her legs always swell after doing much housework or getting a bad cold.So I will really concern about my mum if I can’t be with her for days.And another reason is that I am used to having supper with my mum and sharing interesting news with her. So when I have to be away from my mum,how can I not miss her?
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