问题: Elliott Yamin的"Wait For You"的歌词英译中
这是我的翻译,有不足之处,请大家指教,谢谢!
Verse 1]
I never felt nothing in the world like this before
在世上,在那之前,我从未感到过一无所有
Now I'm missing you
现在,我很想念你
I'm wishing that you would come back through my door
我希望你能回到我身边
Why did you have to go? You could have let
me know
为什么你要离开?你要让我明白
So now I'm all alone,
那么,现在,我单身了
Girl you could have stayed
女孩,你可以留下的
but you wouldnt give me a chance
只是你没有给我一个机会
With you not around it's a little bit more then i can stand
周围,没有你,这更加让我不明白
And all my tears they keep running down my
face
我,泪流满面
Why did you turn away?
为什么,你要离开?
[Bridge]
So why does your pride make you run and hide?
那么,为什么你的骄傲迫使你离开和躲藏?
Are you that afraid of me?
难道你害怕我吗?
But I know it's a lie what you keep inside
但是,我知道,这是你保持的一个谎言
This is not how you wanted to be
这并不是你真正想做的
[Chorus]
So baby I will wait for you
所以,宝贝,我将等待着你
Cause I don''t know what else i can do
因为我不知道,除了这,我还能做什么
Don't tell me I ran out of time
请不要告诉我,时间被我用尽了
If it takes the rest of my life
如果它会花去我剩余的生命
Baby I will wait for you
宝贝,我会等待着你
If you think I'm fine it just aint true
只要你觉得我很好,这是事实的话
I really need you in my life
在我的人生中,我真的需要你
No matter what i have to do I'll wait for you
我做的并没有错 我将等待着你
[Verse 2]
It's been a long time since you called me
很久以前,自从你和我联系
(How could you forget about me)
你怎么可以忘掉我?
You got me feeling crazy (crazy)
你让我感到痴狂
How can you walk away,
你怎么可以离开?
Everything stays the same
所有的事,一如往昔
I just can't do it baby
我不能做到,宝贝
What will it take to make you come back
有什么能让你回来呢?
Girl I told you what it is it just ain't
like that
女孩,我将告诉你这是什么,这就像
Why can't you look at me, your still in love with me
为什么你不能看向我,你依然和我相爱
Don't leave me crying.
请不要离开我,让我哭泣
[Bridge]
Baby why can't we just start over again
宝贝,为什么,我们不能再次重新开始
Get it back to the way it was
让它回到从前
If you give me a chance I can love you right
如果你给我一次机会,我会好好爱你
But your telling me it wont be enough
但是你告诉我,足够了
[Chorus]
So baby I will wait for you
那么,宝贝,我将等待着你
Cause I don''t know what else i can do
因为我不知道,除了这,我还能做什么
Don't tell me I ran out of time
请不要告诉我,时间被我用尽了
If it takes the rest of my life
如果它会花去我剩余的生命
Baby I will wait for you
宝贝,我将等待着你
If you think I'm fine it just aint true
只要你觉得我很好,这是事实的话
I really need you in my life
在我的人生中,我真的需要你
No matter what i have to do I'll wait for you
我做的并没有错 我将等待着你
[Bridge]
So why does you pride make you run and hide
那么,为什么你的骄傲迫使你离开和躲藏?
Are you that afriad of me?
难道你害怕我吗?
But I know it's a lie what your keeping
inside
但是,我知道,这是你保持的一个谎言
Thats not how you wanted to be
这并不是你真正想做的
Baby I will wait for you
宝贝,我将等待着你
Baby I will wait for you
宝贝,我将等待着你
If it's the last thing i do
如果,这是我能做的最后一件事
解答:
对于翻译不能一概而论,在直译最佳的情况下就必须用直译,在意译最佳的情况下就必须用意译,而且不同的文体适合使用不同的翻译方法,对于科技类翻译就不能太多使用意译。
对于歌词的翻译,别看用词简单,但要翻译出韵味并不容易,应该多用意译。所以原来的翻译值得商榷。下面是我的翻译,共同交流:
I never felt nothing in the world like this before
我从未有过这种感觉
Now I'm missing you
我是如此地想念你
I'm wishing that you would come back through my door
我是多么地希望你回到我身边
Why did you have to go? You could have let
me know
你为何离去?你本该告诉我
So now I'm all alone,
我现在是多么地孤单
Girl you could have stayed
姑娘 你本该留下
but you wouldnt give me a chance
但你却不给给我机会
With you not around it's a little bit more than i can stand
没有你在身边 我的日子真难熬
And all my tears they keep running down my
face
我只能以泪洗脸
Why did you turn away?
你为何离去?
[Bridge]
So why does your pride make you run and hide?
你的自尊为何使你逃避和躲藏?
Are you that afraid of me?
是你害怕我吗?
But I know it's a lie what you keep inside
但我知道你心中藏着一个谎言
This is not how you wanted to be
这并不是你心中所想
[Chorus]
So baby I will wait for you
宝贝 我将等着你
Cause I don''t know what else i can do
因为我不知道我还能做什么
Don't tell me I ran out of time
不要告诉我已经没有了时间
If it takes the rest of my life
即使这会耗费我的余生
Baby I will wait for you
宝贝 我将等着你
If you think I'm fine it just aint true
如果你认为我过的好 那你错了
I really need you in my life
我的生命里真的需要你
No matter what i have to do I'll wait for you
不论我得做什么 我将等着你
[Verse 2]
It's been a long time since you called me
你已经很久没有打电话给我了
(How could you forget about me)
你怎么可以把我忘掉?
You got me feeling crazy (crazy)
为了你我感快要疯了
How can you walk away,
你怎么可以离去?
Everything stays the same
一切依然如故
I just can't do it baby
但我不能 宝贝
What will it take to make you come back
我要如何才能使你回到我身边?
Girl I told you what it is it just ain't
like that
姑娘 事情并非你所想的那样
Why can't you look at me, your still in love with me
我们依然相爱 但你为何不看我一眼
Don't leave me crying.
请不要让我为你哭泣
[Bridge]
Baby why can't we just start over again
宝贝 我们为何不能重新开始
Get it back to the way it was
我们为何不能回到从前
If you give me a chance I can love you right
如果你给我机会 我会好好地爱你
But your telling me it wont be enough
但是你告诉我这并不足够
[Chorus]
。。。。。。。。。。。
Baby I will wait for you
宝贝 我将等着你
If it's the last thing i do
即使这是我能做的最后一件事
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