The Mrs.Zhao ia our middle school's teacher.She is my English teacher. she's very kind and easy-going to everybody.one minute,I was ill. Then she was took care of me.After a week,I am all right.She encuorages to me and tell me don't worry.I had cheer up.I love her very much.She love us too.
很毁，真的很毁，一片中考作文被我写成了这样。。太恶心了。。。

The Mrs.Zhao ia our middle school's teacher.She is my English teacher.
人称的前面没有必要用the;这两句话好像是重复表达一样的意思.可以浓缩成一句话:Mrs.Zhao was our English teacher for our middle school years.

she's very kind and easy-going to everybody.one minute,I was ill.
Easy-going是形容赵老师本人,不能说是对每一个人都easy-going.这样说不过去;你是想表达"有一天,我生病了"?可以这样写:She was very kind and nice to everybody. One day,I was ill.

Then she was took care of me.After a week,I am all right.She encuorages to me and tell me don't worry.
动词took前面加了be动词就成了被动语态，所以was去掉;前面用的是过去时态,怎么后面就是"am"?应改成I was all right.或者I got better;最后一句也是一样，应该用过去时态：She encouraged me and told me to not worry about anything.

I had cheer up.I love her very much.She love us too.
Had后面的动词cheer应该为过去分词cheered,或者整句话可为：I cheered up.
另外,我不认为你可以说是你"love"赵老师.这样形容师生之间很不恰当.建议你用like,adore,admire之类的词.老师爱学生可以,只是love要加s.

犯过的错就不要再犯.再考试的时候可要加油罗!