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问题: 帮忙纠正下下面一段的语法错误,谢谢!

Now,I know I am not belong to the world,So,I have to leave.But I also know,after I leaved,There is nobody will cry,Because I am just a toy for them.

解答:

Now,I know I am not belong to the world,So,I have to leave.But I also know,after I leaved,There is nobody will cry,Because I am just a toy for them.


改正版:
Now,I know I do not belong to the world.So,I have to leave.But I also know that after I leaved,nobody will cry,because I am just a toy for them.

am not belong 中,belong 是动词,一般的否定用 do 加 not,而不是 am not ,am 是 be动词的变体,后面要接名词/形容词或副词/或非谓语动词

,So 前后是两句话,用句号.

know,after I leaved,There is nobody will cry,中

know后面要接宾语从句,通常不用逗号分开;
There is 属于多余的表达,用nobody will cry就已经表达清楚了“没有人会哭”

cry,Because I am just a toy for them. 前后是两个分句,Because 开头要小写或把逗号去掉。

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